1. Persuasive Speech Essay
Joseph Froehle
Public Speaking Class
Persuasive Speech Outline
Topic: Organ Donation
Specific Purpose: To persuade my audience to donate their organs and tissues when they die and to
act upon their decision to donate.
Thesis Statement: The need is constantly growing for organ donors and it is very simple to be an
organ donor when you die.
I. INTRODUCTION
A. Attention material/Credibility Material: How do you feel when you have to wait for something
you really, really want? What if it was something you couldn't live without? Well, my cousin was
five years old when he found out he needed a new kidney. He went on the organ waiting list right
away. He was called twice during a six month span that they had a kidney available only to...show
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2) The reason is that there are only on the average 6,000 donors nationally per year (Life Source:
Statistics).
c. You can choose to donate any needed organs or you can specify which organs or tissues you wish
to donate.
2. Organ donation is very important.
a. The following poem by Robert Test entitled, "To Remember Me," shows the importance of organ
donation.
"Give my sight to the man who has never seen a sunrise, a baby's face or love in the eyes of a
woman. Give my heart to a person whose heart has caused nothing but endless days of pain... Take
my bones, every muscle, every fiber and nerve in my body and find a way to make a crippled child
walk...Take my cells, if necessary, and let them grow so that, someday, a speechless boy will shout at
the crack of a bat and a deaf girl will hear the sound of rain against her window
b. Not only is this a problem nationally but also it is a big problem right here at home in Colorado.
1) Nationally, there are over 120,000 people waiting as of November 1, 2011. As of November 7,
2011, there are 1,142 people from Colorado that are on the organ waiting list (Life Source: Statistics).
2) The sad part is that there have only been 137 donors in Colorado so far from January 2011
through November 2011 (Life Source: Newsnotes).
[Transition: I'm sure that you can see the need for people like you to donate your organs. But you
might be asking, well, how can I make sure my organs are donated after I die? Let me tell you.]
B. This
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2. Persuasive Speech
During my persuasive speech, I used an attention getter with a story to put a face on the problem of
the 5–day work week because it is something for the audience to get attached to. In my attention
getter, Jeff Campbell suffers from a stroke from working long hours as an accountant. I believe it
was effective in showing pathos to the problem of the 5–day work week. In my thesis, I clearly
stated the topic and related it to my audience by telling them that it will affect all full–time
employees in America. To conclude my introduction, I gave a preview of the what I was going to
talk about during my speech, which included the problems, causes, and solutions. I believe that my
speech was well organized because I went to different parts of the room for each of my main points,
and because of this my main points were very easy to follow. I transitioned between my main points
very smoothly with talking while walking throughout the room. Throughout my main points, I gave
multiple verbal citations over data that was collected about problems with the 5–day work week and
solutions with the 4–day work week. I did not have a way of verbally proving that my sources were
credible. I am not sure if I had a variety of different supporting materials, but I had a reliable data
and a reliable example of the solution working in the state of Utah. My format for the speech
involved pathos, ethos, and logos to use fulfill maximum effectiveness. Some persuasive strategies
that I used included telling a story, giving data to support my hypothesis, giving the audience a
reason to care about the topic, relating the reasoning about the solution to the audience, giving a
real–life example of the solution working, and giving the audience a call to action at the end of
my speech. If I used fillers, I was unaware of me using them during my speech. During this speech,
I tried to make it a priority to use some vocal variation because I have lacked that skill in past
speeches. So, during my speech, I tried to use some vocal variation especially during the reasoning
parts because vocal variation really helps with reasoning. I used appropriate movement throughout
my speech for each main point to keep the audience interested. I believe that my
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3. Persuasive Speeches
There are three types of persuasive speeches. There are speeches of Value, Fact, and Policy. The
first one speeches of Value are when speaker tries to convince listeners that their personal value
judgment is true through the way they use their words or tone. In speeches of value, we argue
about whether something is right or wrong and moral or immoral. Just like you would do with
questions of fact, you can create your main points by asking a strategic question in your thesis of
"Why is this good?" or "Why is this moral?" The answers to this question will give you the speech's
main points. We will use "Euthanization of dogs is inhumane" The organization will be Topical
because you use the question of why or how to set the specific purpose....show more content...
For example, in a "Euthanization is inhumane" speech, you might make your first main point to
define when an it can be considered inhumane or what makes it inhumane. In most cases though it
would be made clear what you mean by inhumane or moral or good. But in cases where it isn't you
can include what you mean by it, or saying inhumane, in your introduction or in your first main
point. You will want to take in consideration what type ofaudience you're speaking to. Whether it be
a animal rights group, PETA, people who don't even know what euthanization means, approach this
subject with some sensitivity. You as the speaker are not asking the audience to do anything about
it but just to believe that it's not a humane thing to do. The next type of persuasive speech is the
speech of fact. With any of these speeches you will need a thesis. Begin with a thesis that states that
something can be proven, that it happened or didn't happen. Usually the material used in the speech
should be and will be presented with an organization of topical order. It's very important to consider
the evidence being presented cautiously. Ask if it is even possible that the observations actually
happened or
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