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The Narrative Essay:
It Differs From a Simple
Story!
What is a Narrative Essay?
• A narrative is a story
• A narrative essay is a story that has a
specific point
– A narrative essay strives to teach a lesson or
– A narrative essay strives to make a specific
point
– A narrative essay is not a diary entry – the
story is linked to the purpose of the essay
What Should Be Included in a
Narrative Essay?
• Often written in 1st person – I or we – because it
is based on a personal story
• Can also be written in 3rd person
• Has specific sensory details to get the reader
hooked on the story
• Is developed in chronological order
• Has verbs that help paint a picture and draw in
the reader
What Else Does the Narrative
Essay Need?
• Since this is a story, the narrative essay
needs everything a story needs (these are
known as the story elements):
– Has a plot
– Has characters
– Has a problem
– Has a climax
– Often uses dialogue
When Will I Use Narrative Essays?
• A narrative essay tells a simple story
• A narrative essay is not a deeply thought
out synthesis, so this essay form should
be used sparingly for college courses
unless it is specifically assigned
Planning the Narrative Essay
• Write a thesis statement, just as with any other
essay
• Brainstorm for a personal story or observation
that illustrates or proves the thesis statement
• Outline or web the important parts of the story to
be told
• Write an introductory paragraph that includes
the thesis statement, and then write the story
• Because this is a story, use as many
paragraphs as necessary to tell the story
• Write the conclusion that reflects on the thesis
statement
Start With a Thesis Statement
• The thesis will depend upon the story to
be proven.
• The thesis can be something general in
the case of a narrative essay. For
example, you may write, “Oftentimes
people do not follow simple directions.
However, these campers learned just how
important following directions can be.”
What Would You Expect From This
Thesis?
• As the reader, you will expect to learn why
following directions is important.
• As the reader, you will expect to read a
story about camping.
• As the reader, you will expect there to be a
twist in the action.
Outline the Parts of the Story and
Write Out the Story
An Informal Outline of the Story:
• Two campers go camping and ignore rules
• They leave out food
• An animal finds the food
• One of the campers tries to scare off the
animal
• Campers learn to follow the rules
Let’s Read the Essay – The
Introduction
It was a wonderful week to camp in the great
outdoors, even if some of their friends thought it
was a strange way to honeymoon. Trudy and
Jeff were looking forward to their week at Great
Smoky Mountains National Park in Tennessee.
Little did they know what a learning experience
this trip would be. Oftentimes people do not
follow simple directions. However, these
campers learned just how important following
directions can be.
Setting the Scene of the Story
After a scenic drive through the glorious
mountains, Trudy and Jeff arrived at the
camping area. A ranger at the booth handed
them a map and asked, “Have you ever camped
with us before?”
“A better question would be if we ever
camped before,” Jerry answered wryly.
“You’ll be fine. Just remember, this isn’t a
hotel. We do have bears and other animals in
the area, so lock your food up in the car,” said
the ranger as he handed them a lists of Do’s and
Don’ts.
Developing the Plot
Exhausted from their first attempt at
setting up a campsite, Trudy and Jeff
crawled inside the tent that evening,
giggling and whispering to each other.
They doused the light inside the tent and
ignored the world outside the canvas. The
ranger’s list was left laying on the tent
floor.
Continuing the Action – Vivid Word
Choices
Just before sunrise, Jerry was awakened by
the sounds of metal ripping. He quietly slipped
out of the tent. A fully grown black bear was
sitting on their picnic table busily prying the lid
off the cooler they neglected to store in the car
the night before. Finding the pound of bacon he
prized, the bear leaned back on his hind
haunches and began to devour the bacon. Jerry
started screaming at the bear, “Get out of here!
What do you think you’re doing?”
Reaching the Climax
By this point, most of the other campers had
exited their own tents and watched the scene
unfold. The bear was not amused by Jerry’s
threatening, especially with the remainder of the
bacon at stake. The black bear stood on top of
the picnic table to his full height. While the bear
actually stood only four feet tall, the extra height
of the table caused him to loom over Jerry’s
head. The bear suddenly fell forward, striking the
table with his full weight and snarled. The table
moaned in response.
The Climax Continues
Much more quickly than anyone anticipated,
the bear reached out his huge, menacing paw
towards Jerry. Fear leapt into Jerry’s eyes as he
turned and ran back into his tent. Zip! closed the
zipper.
Now, one can only imagine how much time
passed before Jerry and Trudy realized the
futility of his preventive actions. How was a
flimsy flap of canvas going to stop a full-sized,
angry bear?
Finding the Solution
Fortunately, the bear was much more interested
in the left-over bacon than in Jerry and Trudy.
The bear cautiously turned around, climbed
back on top of the table, and continued to eat his
early breakfast. He carefully examined the
remaining contents of the cooler. Finding nothing
else as delectable as the bacon, the bear
jumped off the picnic table, grunted, licked his
paws and mouth, and then lumbered off into the
deeper woods that surrounded the campground.
The Concluding Paragraph
The audience that had gathered
applauded spontaneously, then slowly
returned to their own campsites, shaking
their heads in disbelief. Meanwhile, inside
the thin canvas tent, Trudy and Jeff had lit
their lantern and were carefully studying
the items listed on the Do’s and Don’ts list.
The rest of their trip was blissfully peaceful
as they made sure to follow all the rules at
the campsite.
Additional Ideas for Your Thesis
• Without a thesis, or a point, you are not really
writing a narrative essay but a narrative – make
sure to have a point. You can get help finding a
point when you:
– Think about sayings or quotes that teach a lesson
– Think about lessons learned from Aesop’s fables
– Think about a time when you learned something
valuable
– Read quotations to spawn ideas
– Read your own journals for a time something
happened worth telling others about
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A PowerPoint that explains the narrative essay

  • 1. The Narrative Essay: It Differs From a Simple Story!
  • 2. What is a Narrative Essay? • A narrative is a story • A narrative essay is a story that has a specific point – A narrative essay strives to teach a lesson or – A narrative essay strives to make a specific point – A narrative essay is not a diary entry – the story is linked to the purpose of the essay
  • 3. What Should Be Included in a Narrative Essay? • Often written in 1st person – I or we – because it is based on a personal story • Can also be written in 3rd person • Has specific sensory details to get the reader hooked on the story • Is developed in chronological order • Has verbs that help paint a picture and draw in the reader
  • 4. What Else Does the Narrative Essay Need? • Since this is a story, the narrative essay needs everything a story needs (these are known as the story elements): – Has a plot – Has characters – Has a problem – Has a climax – Often uses dialogue
  • 5. When Will I Use Narrative Essays? • A narrative essay tells a simple story • A narrative essay is not a deeply thought out synthesis, so this essay form should be used sparingly for college courses unless it is specifically assigned
  • 6. Planning the Narrative Essay • Write a thesis statement, just as with any other essay • Brainstorm for a personal story or observation that illustrates or proves the thesis statement • Outline or web the important parts of the story to be told • Write an introductory paragraph that includes the thesis statement, and then write the story • Because this is a story, use as many paragraphs as necessary to tell the story • Write the conclusion that reflects on the thesis statement
  • 7. Start With a Thesis Statement • The thesis will depend upon the story to be proven. • The thesis can be something general in the case of a narrative essay. For example, you may write, “Oftentimes people do not follow simple directions. However, these campers learned just how important following directions can be.”
  • 8. What Would You Expect From This Thesis? • As the reader, you will expect to learn why following directions is important. • As the reader, you will expect to read a story about camping. • As the reader, you will expect there to be a twist in the action.
  • 9. Outline the Parts of the Story and Write Out the Story An Informal Outline of the Story: • Two campers go camping and ignore rules • They leave out food • An animal finds the food • One of the campers tries to scare off the animal • Campers learn to follow the rules
  • 10. Let’s Read the Essay – The Introduction It was a wonderful week to camp in the great outdoors, even if some of their friends thought it was a strange way to honeymoon. Trudy and Jeff were looking forward to their week at Great Smoky Mountains National Park in Tennessee. Little did they know what a learning experience this trip would be. Oftentimes people do not follow simple directions. However, these campers learned just how important following directions can be.
  • 11. Setting the Scene of the Story After a scenic drive through the glorious mountains, Trudy and Jeff arrived at the camping area. A ranger at the booth handed them a map and asked, “Have you ever camped with us before?” “A better question would be if we ever camped before,” Jerry answered wryly. “You’ll be fine. Just remember, this isn’t a hotel. We do have bears and other animals in the area, so lock your food up in the car,” said the ranger as he handed them a lists of Do’s and Don’ts.
  • 12. Developing the Plot Exhausted from their first attempt at setting up a campsite, Trudy and Jeff crawled inside the tent that evening, giggling and whispering to each other. They doused the light inside the tent and ignored the world outside the canvas. The ranger’s list was left laying on the tent floor.
  • 13. Continuing the Action – Vivid Word Choices Just before sunrise, Jerry was awakened by the sounds of metal ripping. He quietly slipped out of the tent. A fully grown black bear was sitting on their picnic table busily prying the lid off the cooler they neglected to store in the car the night before. Finding the pound of bacon he prized, the bear leaned back on his hind haunches and began to devour the bacon. Jerry started screaming at the bear, “Get out of here! What do you think you’re doing?”
  • 14. Reaching the Climax By this point, most of the other campers had exited their own tents and watched the scene unfold. The bear was not amused by Jerry’s threatening, especially with the remainder of the bacon at stake. The black bear stood on top of the picnic table to his full height. While the bear actually stood only four feet tall, the extra height of the table caused him to loom over Jerry’s head. The bear suddenly fell forward, striking the table with his full weight and snarled. The table moaned in response.
  • 15. The Climax Continues Much more quickly than anyone anticipated, the bear reached out his huge, menacing paw towards Jerry. Fear leapt into Jerry’s eyes as he turned and ran back into his tent. Zip! closed the zipper. Now, one can only imagine how much time passed before Jerry and Trudy realized the futility of his preventive actions. How was a flimsy flap of canvas going to stop a full-sized, angry bear?
  • 16. Finding the Solution Fortunately, the bear was much more interested in the left-over bacon than in Jerry and Trudy. The bear cautiously turned around, climbed back on top of the table, and continued to eat his early breakfast. He carefully examined the remaining contents of the cooler. Finding nothing else as delectable as the bacon, the bear jumped off the picnic table, grunted, licked his paws and mouth, and then lumbered off into the deeper woods that surrounded the campground.
  • 17. The Concluding Paragraph The audience that had gathered applauded spontaneously, then slowly returned to their own campsites, shaking their heads in disbelief. Meanwhile, inside the thin canvas tent, Trudy and Jeff had lit their lantern and were carefully studying the items listed on the Do’s and Don’ts list. The rest of their trip was blissfully peaceful as they made sure to follow all the rules at the campsite.
  • 18. Additional Ideas for Your Thesis • Without a thesis, or a point, you are not really writing a narrative essay but a narrative – make sure to have a point. You can get help finding a point when you: – Think about sayings or quotes that teach a lesson – Think about lessons learned from Aesop’s fables – Think about a time when you learned something valuable – Read quotations to spawn ideas – Read your own journals for a time something happened worth telling others about