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Learn why you should kill your darlings, murder your adverbs, and embrace active tense. Find out how to 'shape' your story, unlock the power of thirds, and tune into your natural pacing. Discover the power of simplicity, brevity and clarity.
14. “Leave out the boring parts.”
- Elmore Leonard,
author of Get Shorty
15. Write Tight
Academic
They have the ability to
...
A greater number
They’re at the age at
which they’re least likely
...
Blog
They can ...
More
They probably won’t ...
16. Make Every Word Justify Its Existence
Academic
Blog
experienced
lawyer
lawyer
17. Make Every Word Justify Its Existence
Academic
Blog
But what I do have I have
is a ...
18. Make Every Word Justify Its Existence
Academic
Blog
When you’re
finished up ...
When you’re
finished ...
19.
20. Editing Hacks:
Watch for repetitive verb forms
• Rather than trying to draw the
blueprints ...
• Rather than drawing the blueprints ...
21. Editing Hacks:
Group Parts of Speech Together
• Buy the medicine and distribute it.
• Buy and distribute the medicine.
23. Editing Hacks:
Start with subject
• Approximately 4,000 years ago, cats
were domesticated.
• Cats were domesticated about 4,000
years ago.
24. Editing Hacks:
When you read the paper, look
for coupons.
The weekly circular lists sales.
Clip coupons.
Read the circular.
To see what’s on sale, look at the Check the website.
website.
You can combine manufacturer
Combine discounts.
and store discounts.
Who am I?Why am I qualified to talk about this?Why is this subject important?
You’re writing a blog post, not a doctoral thesis.
Notice that I said “tight,” rather than “short.”
Cut any word that isn’t necessary.
Here are a few tactics, a few hacks, you can use to create clarity.
Now that you’ve laid the foundation of good writing, the next step is to choose a shape for your story.
3-Part structure: Still maintain the inverted pyramid at the top. Then you make a quick twist in the middle, signaling that you’re switching to a narrative format, telling how the story unfolded chronologically.For example:Police shot and killed a 37-year-old local man after he disregarded their orders to drop his weapon.He was pronounced dead at the scene. No bystanders were harmed.Twist: The witnesses gave this latest account of his alleged madness:He became angry after going to a neighborhood bar on Friday night. He stormed into his ex-wife’s house and threatened to kill her. She called her mom.At the same time, a neighbor happened to be walking their dog and heard the commotion. The neighbor called 911.
Also 3-part structure:Anecdotal LedeFollowed by Facts, Research, Data – And since this is a blog, helpful tips for your readers, bulletpoints.Circle back to Lede at the endFace behind the numbers,Then the numbers,Then the Face .... Or Close-up, Wide-Angle, Close-Up
Rumplestilskin: spins straw into gold for her 3 times: first in exchange for her necklace, then her ring, and then her firstborn child. lets her guess his name 3 times, over the span of 3 daysScrooge gets 3 visits from 3 ghosts (past, present and future)Snow White: skin white as snow, lips red as blood, hair black as ebony ... gets 3 visits from wicked stepmother (first tries to kill her w/ corset that’s too tight, then with poisoned hair comb, and finally with poisoned apple)
Hourglass + Sandwich are 3-part structuresWithin other story structures, like narrative arc, you’ll still find the rule of 3rdsThree Little Pigs / Goldilocks and the Three Bears
“Grow Your Dough”
NO ONE WANTS to “Pay Down” their debt.
Even the master of horror, Stephen King himself, is afraid of something ...
Adverbs are the peeling 1970’s laminate countertops, Killer Verbs are the stainless steelMURDER your adverbs.
Anytime you see an adverb, replace it with a killer verb. THAT’S how you retain power.In fairness: murdering all adverbs is a little extreme. There are a rare few that deserve to live.
Sol Stein
Verbs pack the most punch, Adjectives are a close second
Even if you reveal it in the very next line – you still establish tension, suspense, and then release.
Even if you reveal it in the very next line – you still establish tension, suspense, and then release.
Even if you reveal it in the very next line – you still establish tension, suspense, and then release.
Literally add the illustration – sprinkle photos, images, stick figures, sidebar boxes throughout
[Number]+[Adjective] + [What / Benefit]6 Hilarious Cat Videos12 Shocking Facts About Your Credit Score
[Number]+[Adjective] + [What / Benefit]6 Hilarious Cat Videos12 Shocking Facts About Your Credit Score[Number]+[Adjective] + [What / Benefit]6 Hilarious Cat Videos12 Shocking Facts About Your Credit Score
Change it to present tense – “has stagnated” = “is stagnant”Ask a question ... Immediately engages reader
Change it to present tense – “has stagnated” = “is stagnant”Ask a question ... Immediately engages readerAdd a powerful adjective